Feedback on Label

WINTERS · #1 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 08:42 PM

Well, here it is. I need feedback before I can commit the design to print. Let me know what you think.

Matthew · #2 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 08:46 PM

Very busy - font may be too small to read. I would loose the No Limit texas Hold-em and remove the quotes for I'm Dominated.

WINTERS · #3 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 09:03 PM

here it is with your suggestions:

PocketRocket · #4 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 09:07 PM

I agree with Matthew. The font is probably too small, especially using a serif font in upper and lower case. The text should be at least 6 points, though you might be able to go to 7 or 8 for the denomination, and if you want to use the same font, try it in all caps and in bold if it isn't already in bold. Further agreeing with Matthew, you should probably keep the curved text at the top of the page to a single line, "DAK'S CARD ROOM" in bold 8-10 pt type would be good.

I don't understand the "I'm dominated", so I'm not sure if the quotes should remain or not.

WINTERS · #5 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 09:44 PM

The "I'm Dominated" is a joke at our local game (long story) Anyway I here's another:

Matthew · #6 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 09:51 PM

Much cleaner look - still don't like the quotes - but much improved.

cubsfan970 · #7 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 10:30 PM

I would have to agree about the quotes...just doesn't look right. Also, you might wantt o move the top text in a bit to avoid any problems with printing registration issues.

pankwindu · #8 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 10:47 PM

I like the fonts better on the latest version. Also, I think the quotes are fine. They give the phrase more of a, I don't know, non-serious feel, distinct from the "official" card room name. Appropriate enough for a running joke phrase IMHO.

Fins · #9 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 10:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WINTERS

The "I'm Dominated" is a joke at our local game (long story) Anyway I here's another:

I was going to suggest "Get Dominated" instead but if it's an inside joke then it's better...

What about using a silhouette that has a more dominatrix look... not crazy about the one you've chosen reminds me of a mud flap or Barbi

?

Played with one for fun but couldn't get it to look right at scale... fonts are all way too small but fig'd I post it to show another silhouette... probably better ones out there.

Matthew · #10 (**permalink**) 11-29-2005, 11:03 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Fins

I was going to suggest "Get Dominated" instead but if it's an inside joke then it's better...

What about using a silhouette that has a more dominatrix look... not crazy about the one you've chosen reminds me of a mud flap or Barbi

?

Played with one for fun but couldn't get it to look right at scale... fonts are all way too small but fig'd I post it to show another silhouette... probably better ones out there.