I'm not gonna comment cuz it looks like you could kick my a$$ (or at least be willing to try).
Seriously though, needs content. Do you have a girlfriend that could assist in the presentation?
Seriously though #2, I do appreciate the effort and I look forward to the next issue. All (most

) good things take time. I'm sure with a little more time, you will have a good thing going. Good luck dude and have fun.
Russ