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04-06-2006, 08:40 AM
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What do you think? Designed to be on a Chipco.
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04-06-2006, 08:43 AM
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Hard to read the "Eat or be eaten" portion. Maybe make the colors contrasting to the background. And the stroke around "Poker Lounge" muddies the font. Nice concept though, a few tweaks and it should look great! |
04-06-2006, 08:45 AM
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The text in the middle is probably not going to be very readable, but I like the design. The bite out of the corner is pretty cool 
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04-06-2006, 08:57 AM
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I'm all over the place with the eat or be eaten thing, trying to make it look better. Thanks for the crits! |
04-06-2006, 09:18 AM
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Those are sweet! 
You may want to try a black outline on the "Eat or Be Eaten" that may out line it out and make it more clearer. |
04-06-2006, 10:14 AM
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Something about the bite doesn't feel right. Maybe re-work the shape of it a bit?
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04-06-2006, 10:17 AM
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I'd much rather eat than be eaten....I was thinking alomg the line of a meatball parm sub from Milano's in East Boston where the meatball subs melt in your mouth and put you in a good mood all day
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04-06-2006, 10:34 AM
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Originally Posted by Poboy Something about the bite doesn't feel right. Maybe re-work the shape of it a bit? | Hmm, I wanted it to resemble a shark bite, but still fit the overall feel of the chip. Since sharks have a crazy amount of teeth, I figured making the bite not exactly uniform would work well.
I guess it doesn't come off that way huh, lol. |
04-06-2006, 11:21 AM
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I think the bite works great! One thing is that the Poker Lounge is a bit difficult to read, it looks kinda scrunched together. Maybe you could try stretching it out a little? Or perhaps using a thicker script font so that the stroke doesn't make things crushed together.
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04-06-2006, 11:48 AM
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Originally Posted by 2_hotty Hmm, I wanted it to resemble a shark bite, but still fit the overall feel of the chip. Since sharks have a crazy amount of teeth, I figured making the bite not exactly uniform would work well.
I guess it doesn't come off that way huh, lol. | Can't put my finger on it... maybe it's just not arced enough, or maybe it's the angle of the teeth marks at the corners...
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