Your math is incorrect in rule 9. The raise was 300 more (BB+Raise), so the following action needs to be 400 to call, (the raise and the BB) or at a minimum, 700 (to make a minimum raise) or more.
I personally wouldn't go into the explanation on some of them as you do, but if you feel this is the best thing for the group, and your players, then better to have it spelled out for them.
For reference, mine are located here:
http://www.byocpoker.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=33
Feel free to rape and pillage.
