[Lynbark Designs]

Good start.

I assume you have a set of photos to pick thru which maintain a similar style??
I think the last set of mockups will have the "babes" too small. Try printing them on your own printer to gauge the clarity at these very small sizes.
I like using gradients, but the black in the darker area of the background usually doesn't work as well as white, or white outlined text. Others will argue that an all white background looks best (certainly gives the chip a nice clean feel).